Hi Laura,

 

I've amended page 13 again along the lines you suggested. I think it looks good like this. Hope you like it too?

 



 

David :-)

Further Updates

Hi Laura,

 

here are the two page amendments you asked me to make. Pages 13-14:

 

 

And pages 15-16:

I hope the picture of the sweets works better for you here. If not, perhaps it might be better to use it as an additional image on page 24, accompanying the pics of your friends, instead of as a background image. Let me know what you think.

David :-)